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rosieknight ([personal profile] rosieknight) wrote2007-11-19 09:20 pm
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Gift fic 19 for Immora.

I'm feeling a bit low on inspiration today. However, I do like how this fic turned out.

(Inspired by "Problems with Authority" by Stretch from the tf2007fun lj community. Edit: Now with permission to play in her sand box!)

"Do you realize most of the decisions in the world are made by those who'll feel little to none of the impact of their rulings?

It's a frightening idea. And once you have that revelation, the knowledge never really releases you.

Don't believe me? Let's look at history.

World War I had generals who'd never even seen a machine gun in action ordering thousands of soldiers into range of that weapon to "capture" another yard or so. The troops were cut down in swaths; leaving only the lucky to survive to retreat to the very trenches they'd just left. And this didn't happen once or twice, these sort of pushes were common during the first years of the War!

And don't get me started on the division of Africa, the creation of the Armistice of World War I, or the Yalta conference!

On a more positive note, the decision to grant women suffrage was made by men. Granted, the southern states in the United States only granted women the vote in an attempt to counter the votes of the male freedmen. Still, very few men were directly affected by their wives, sisters, daughters, and nieces being able to vote in elections.

There's also the abolition of slavery, the creation of the Constitution of the United States of America, and Civil Rights Amendment in the positive examples of this phenomena.

Now, keeping in mind all this background information, I want you gentlemen to explain to me just why you feel entitled to make decisions that affect the Autobots - members of an autonomous, sentient, alien race- without at least one of them present to offer their opinions, grievances, desires, compromises, and give them a chance to support or reject whatever plans all of you come up with?

Well, sirs?"

End.

[identity profile] drharper.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 02:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooo! This is GOOD! You should post this far and wide!

[identity profile] rosieknight.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm going to post this to tf2007_fun right now.

Just debating if I should edit anything.

[identity profile] drharper.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Looks just fine to me. :D

[identity profile] rosieknight.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
*shrugs* I'm thinking about adding a begining section to explain how Will got to this point.

[identity profile] rosieknight.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 03:56 pm (UTC)(link)
*reads over the begining section, then the rant* Eh... I think I like the Rant by itself better. It flows much more smoothly.

[identity profile] drharper.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
A beginning section would be nice...but the Rant does stand very well by itself.

[identity profile] rosieknight.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 04:06 pm (UTC)(link)
The problem with the beginning is it wants to be in 3rd person limited, and the rant is 1st person.

It's not a pleasant transition.

[identity profile] drharper.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 04:10 pm (UTC)(link)
You could write it from the POV of one of the idiot generals who is about to be taken down a peg by said rant. :)

[identity profile] rosieknight.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 04:16 pm (UTC)(link)
*grins* Oh, that is so snicker worthy.

I may do a follow up with Sec Def Keller's thoughts on the meeting, Lennox' rant, and some of the fall-out from everything.

[identity profile] drharper.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 04:19 pm (UTC)(link)
*buffs nails on shirt*

Just a standard part of my Evil Muse (TM) services.

[identity profile] rosieknight.livejournal.com 2007-11-20 05:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Does it count if the person wants inspiration?