I feel like a beta!
Aug. 30th, 2008 10:21 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
rosieknightIf you've been following the US presidential election news, you are aware that McCain has named Sarah Palin as his Vice Presidential choice.
Being curious to the parties reactions, I tracked down some responses.
Here's the one that got me completely confused. The Republican goes from praising Palin to talking about Obama to bringing in Regan(?) back to Palin and making a comment on the length of the campaign season.
Quite honestly, this article never would've passed my high school english class. It's too unfocused.
In contrast, the Democrat's article is far more on topic. The points he makes are valid and to the point. As a reader, I find myself being swayed by this article.
Regardless of my political stance, the Democrat's article wins for persuasive power and internal cohesion.
RK.
Being curious to the parties reactions, I tracked down some responses.
Here's the one that got me completely confused. The Republican goes from praising Palin to talking about Obama to bringing in Regan(?) back to Palin and making a comment on the length of the campaign season.
Quite honestly, this article never would've passed my high school english class. It's too unfocused.
In contrast, the Democrat's article is far more on topic. The points he makes are valid and to the point. As a reader, I find myself being swayed by this article.
Regardless of my political stance, the Democrat's article wins for persuasive power and internal cohesion.
RK.
